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<3 Attempts, Tell me what you think :D

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You took my heart.
You broke it too.
I can’t beileve.
That I loved you <--- I made that one my ex's valentine card :3



Love is Simple.
Love is Kind.
Love is Gental.
Will you be mine? <---Another Valentine card, i made it so my friend can give it too her boyfriend

Our laughs are limitless.
Our memiors countless.
Our friendship endless.
Your are awsome and you are kind.
I gave you my heart and then said,
Please give it time. <I>:)
~Alie!! :3
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They are beautiful poems, keep up the good work and i would place them in your book of shadows
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Why, 1. i don't have a BOS and 2. i thought that was only for spells?
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In some ways you can turn your poems into spells, after all spells are usually rhyme and can come out of nowhere. Making spells that rhyme helps you to remember them easy. I put anything worth while, or that I think I can use inmy BOS, it’s also my journal.



Damn your busting my chops today :roll:
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Hmm....Sounds cool. But how do i turn a love poem into a love spell?
~Alie!! :3
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Post by sylphaxiom »

quite nice poems!

To turn them into spells, I would suggest adding things to em and giving them an intent. Maybe even re-wording them a little.
May the Gods be with you, and the hand of Fate be a gentle touch to guide you.
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It's just poem's, it can't be turned into spell my dear.
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BOS's don't ONLY contain spells. BOS's contain experiences, poems, things you've learned, because BOS's usually drift from generation to generation.
Like, Charmed. It's a bad example, but that's what i'm trying to get at.
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Ginger Faith! wrote:BOS's don't ONLY contain spells. BOS's contain experiences, poems, things you've learned, because BOS's usually drift from generation to generation.
Like, Charmed. It's a bad example, but that's what i'm trying to get at.
True that!
& Also, love the poems! very beautiful((:
Breathing in I feel gratitude; Breathing out I give thanks.
Breathing in I feel joyful; Breathing out I celebrate.
Breathing in I know compassion; Breathing I am compassion.
Breathing in I feel loved; Breathing out I offer love.
Breathing in I am still; Breathing out I am at peace.
Om.
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Thank you very much, but i really don't want my poems turned into spells. They sound and feel better this way :>
~Alie!! :3
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