My Haiku (title undecided)

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LittleBit1309

My Haiku (title undecided)

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To my fair maiden,
I am but a summer's breeze,
Longing to be heard.
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Tasariel
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Re: My Haiku (title undecided)

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This is so cute and full of meaning! I'm thinking of all kinds of different scenarios between the two lovers with just what you've given here. I like that a lot! :)
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prettygirl123

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wow thats really good
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DaughterofErebus
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Re: My Haiku (title undecided)

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I have one word.... AMAZING!!!!!!!!
Never let life kill your spark ~ Crown the Empire
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