A Poem I wrote for this Valentines.

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Avildar Ratlav

A Poem I wrote for this Valentines.

Post by Avildar Ratlav »

Ok, This is a poem I wrote to a friend of mine. She is currently with someone else, sadly she is with this person because of a baby, not because she Loves him. So you guys know, we used to be a couple about 10 years ago, we dated for 6 years, and was planning to get married, but we went our seperate ways because we both still had abit of growing up to do. So please don't look ill of me, for giveing this to a taken woman. :?

"Here's your Valentines Poem" By Me

The day when you kissed me, My head dropped to your chest.
With the feelings of happiness and infinite bliss,
While the emotions were there my tongue dared not speak,
Flashed up as in a burning flame, from my heart to my cheek;
Your arms grabbed me fast; to stop me from things that would be said
Heart beat to heart beat, the words were kept in our heads.
Your glances always drew my soul through my eyes,
As a child draws from down deep, that you may here their crys.
Your lips clung to mine till I had to pull away,
I turned my head, coverd my face, then felt I had to run away.

I have this Love for you, I am not allowed to share.
When I go home, It hurts me because your not there.
I think of a time when our love was care free, it was so full of life
between just you and me.
Now seems our Love has to be hidden away, hidden deep in our hearts,
and don't get to see the light of day.
I long for a time when I can freely speak of how I feel,
to let you know, that this is forever and couldn't be more real.

I know people say that I've been a fool,
they wonder why I given you my heart and soul,
but they don't know the things you have told me,
with your eyes, your unspoken words, and even your sighs.
I know you Love me, even tho it hurts,
I know you don't want to hurt me, and thats why you pull away first.
I am confident tho, we will be able to show our Love one day.
Till then we will keep it restraind and go on thinking of kiss we had that day.
One last thing I probley shouldn't say, but I have to say it, it's Valentines day.
just know I'm here, and I always will be for you,
I Love you "-------" and I know you love me too.
Have a happy Valentines day, I know I will, because I expressed a feeling to you,
from behind my shell.
I will now Hide my Love for you, deep in away, till we come upon a time that we both can say.
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Post by Tigerlily* »

That is really beautiful!!!!

Trust me I know the feeling of not being with the person you should be with,and it hurts,really hurts!!! :cry:

Really beautiful poem!!!!

BB!!!!

Tigerlily
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Post by Avildar Ratlav »

Thanks,

Me and this woman are great friends atm, I can look but not touch... at least not till she gets some sense, to leave the guy if she don't love him like she claims. But, it's ok I like being friends with her too, I just hate to see her make herself miserable, because of what "He" thinks is best for the baby. :(
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Post by 5moons »

I like that poem, As my english teacher always said.
"IT IS PERFECT TO THE MAKER AND THE LISTENER WILL FEEL THE WORK OF THE WRITER. WHEN THE WRITER PUTS THEIR HEART INTO IT."
Ms. Davis.
Yah she was a bit hard to understand somedays.
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Post by Heaven_and_Earth »

Avildar i loved it incredibly your words the poem it was magnificent.


~Justin~
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Post by Marie* »

It is such a sad thing to know that two people are in love and for some reason or another can not be together. It was a great poem. I hope for your sake and her's she gains the strength to leave him. It really is worse for a child to see two parents together that are not happy then to have them apart and be happy.

Marie
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Post by Avildar Ratlav »

Thanks All,

I really like hearing when people appreciate what I write. Makes me feel real good. :)
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