Blue Ridge

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phoenixfiress

Blue Ridge

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By: phoenixfiress

A breeze tilts.
I watch the blue ridge
separate cellophane water
from crystal sky.
Two trees on a bank stand sharp
and alone among a hundred.
Two birds drift apart
on quietly dipping waters.
One turns under the surface
to claim a meal, and I take its
icy spot for a time.
The bird crests with a chilled
fish in its gullet.
I break the surface
with ink still on my hand.
Marie*
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Post by Marie* »

I really like that. It made me feel as if I were right there. It's good to actually be able to feel it. Good job!

Marie
phoenixfiress

Post by phoenixfiress »

Thank you. It was the first time I was actually inspired by nature to write a poem. Before then, my work was mostly abstract. I'm glad it struck a chord with someone.

-phoenixfiress
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