The Beginning of Enlightenment

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Healing_Touch

The Beginning of Enlightenment

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Peace beholden unto me
My Blessed Mother Goddess
I seek the comfort of your arms
Grant to us your eternal love

Join now, my brothers and sister, our circle
Let in the Light
Let it spread throughout your being
Burning away the darkness in our hearts
To leave behind the love for all

Peace beholden unto US
Let it be done
That our circle is complete and we are family
Our Family bigger then ours in a physical sense
May our souls be interconneted through our one beloved Blessed Mother
DREAMWALKER

Re: No Title, if you think of one plz tell

Post by DREAMWALKER »

The Beginning of Enlightenment is the title and you are very good at poetry :D
wiccanpisces

Re: The Beginning of Enlightenment

Post by wiccanpisces »

that was a great poem!.. smiley_dance
Healing_Touch

Re: The Beginning of Enlightenment

Post by Healing_Touch »

Thanks for the comments and I am glad Dream that you think I am great at poetry :D and thanks Pisces. I am glad that you both like it so much :D
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illbehere
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Re: The Beginning of Enlightenment

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um. it doesnt seem like a poem to me. theres nothing wrong with it, its just, its so spiritual. reminds me of a prayer :) i like it though. its like a pagan prayer ^.^
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