poem i wrote for class

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HollyWolf

poem i wrote for class

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In love and trust is how I live
What I get is what I give
Each element a part of me
Helping to set my spirit free
Earth, Air, Fire and Water
Help me be a perfect daughter
Earth to be grounded, Air to be free
Always minding the law of three
Fire to change, Water to heal
Learning it’s all right to feel
I do not judge or worship Satan
A fact I feel I need to straighten
Eight words of law I must fulfill
“An ye harm none do what you will”

hope you like. i wanted to incorrpurate the wiccan reed. :type:
Chaokitty

poem i wrote for class

Post by Chaokitty »

I actually like this a lot :) I used to write a lot of poetry when I was younger. My only thing is that I would take out the two lines about Satan ( NOT because its about him lol) only because I think it goes without saying ;) and without those two lines; the poem would be the perfect length.

Blessings <3
HollyWolf

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Post by HollyWolf »

i put it in because there are idiots in my class that the first thing they thought was that i did worship satan, and it bugged me. so it was a line i felt i needed to add. I'm really glad you like it though. wasn't sure if people would.
Chaokitty

poem i wrote for class

Post by Chaokitty »

Oh I see, makes sense more sense. Good job :)
HollyWolf

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Post by HollyWolf »

do you know if there is any way i can attach like a jpeg file to a post? i would love to actually put up the full project so people can see it.
Chaokitty

poem i wrote for class

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I'm not sure, Hun...I use the app. And there are buttons on here, but I don't know how you're using it. Sorry dear :(
HollyWolf

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Post by HollyWolf »

thats alright. thanks though. I'll figure it out. :)
HollyWolf

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gonna have to post it to a site cause i cant save it as a small enough doc ::darkmood::
HollyWolf

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Post by HollyWolf »

yay! here is the image that went with my poem. smileydance smiley_dance
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HollyWolf

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the poem wraps around the moon and the goddesses hope you guys like it
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