Help with spell pls

Post by **emilyrsms** » Wed Oct 19, 2005 1:43 pm

well i have this one spell that ive been trying to do for the past wekk but i can't seem to get it right here it is:
drop 2 drops of water on you and your beloved and say this 1 time

sacred water flow from me
to draw him ever near
as endless rivers run to sea
his path to me is clear

a love thats true once here he'll find
and know his journys end
and in his heart and soul and mind
he'll know our lives should blend

are there any suggestions to get this spell right?

Post by **[Haley]** » Thu Oct 20, 2005 6:53 pm

Define "get it right".

Post by **Moon_Stone** » Fri Nov 04, 2005 12:50 pm

Well, Emily- that spell sounds like it was designed to bend someone's will. I would strongly recommend against pursuing this. Magic never works when it is a working that may be against someone's will.

~MoonStone

Post by **emilyrsms** » Fri Nov 11, 2005 3:00 pm

what do you mean?

Post by **Moon_Stone** » Fri Nov 11, 2005 3:45 pm

to draw him ever near

his path to me is clear

a love thats true once here he'll find

he'll know our lives should blend

Emily- these few lines, especially the "he'll know our lives should blend" sounds like this is someone who has rejected you and you are trying to have him come back to you. You are calling him to you ("draw him ever near" & "his path to me is clear") then compelling him to love you ("a love that's true once here he'll find") and further compelling him to stay ("he'll know our lives should blend"). This may not be your intention, but that is really how this spell comes across. I'd suggest re-wording it if you are just trying to strengthen a love that is already blooming and mutually desired, but the way it stands now, it really seems to be aiming the wrong direction; seeking to bend his will to love you.

Hope that helped!

~BB~